Thursday 24 May 2012

One For You, Two For Me..., Chapter 12, Parts 1 and 2 - Elaisse's Revenge...

       The only way I can explain how it feels when Elaisse is dominant is that I'm watching but if she gets stabbed then I can feel the pain too, well, I get the pain and she just ignores it and keeps going.
       All it took was for her to raise her hands and shadows knocked back all of the Hollow Men within ten metres. That cleared a path to Nix who had already collapsed but he was breathing.
       See, he's safe. Elaisse said to me mockingly, but she did seem a little happy that he was too.
       Shut up and keep going then give me back control. I replied but I was relieved to see he was alive.
       Elaisse sighed and then shot tendrils of darkness at any lumbering idiot who got within her range. In thirty seconds she had nearly destroyed all of the army. Any who remained seemed to have got the message and ran away in their awkward stumbling way.
       Now hand over control. I thought, pounding at the mental cage.
       "Not yet, Lynx. Fun first." she said and took a step towards Nix whilst drawing a knife, oblivious to the person who had just teleported back behind her.




 Sheldon Haze looked at the others. Elaisse was drawing near. They needed him to stop her.
       He took a step towards her then stopped. Why should he help? He'd always been mocked by them. Why should he help?
       But another voice chimed in. Lynxia saved you, it said. You owe her your life. it continued.
       But the doubt fought back. You've already repayed the favour. Leave. Teleport. Don't look back. it said.
       And he did.




I bought posting forward a couple of days as I'm bored... It was meant to be posted on Saturday. Oh well, lucky for you I'm bored and have access to a computer.



And I'm sure that at least ONE person must have been waiting for the cover so here it is...




Lynxia x

5 comments:

  1. THE COVER REALLY CAPTURES THE STORY LYNXIA!

    WHY ARE YOUR CHAPTERS SO SHORT??? (Rhetorical question) IF THE REMAINING CHAPFER ARE THE SAME ONE FOR YOU'LL BE OVER IN JUST A FEW PARAGRAPHS! NOOOOO!

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  2. Can't believe it's ending! Lynxia, I know I must have said this a lot, but I'll say it again. This is AWESOME! I really said 'Wow' out loud when I saw the cover. Did you make it or edit it a little(besides adding the title)? Or did you just find the perfect picture on the internet and put the title on? It's really cool.

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